时间:2024-05-07
杨庆春
【话题分析】
兴趣与爱好是我们日常生活的重要组成部分。具有正能量的兴趣与爱好不仅能丰富人们的业余生活,而且也能促进社会和谐发展。这一话题主要考查学生如何表达“对某件事情感兴趣”“喜欢做某事”“ 介绍某一项兴趣爱好”以及“介绍并分享自己的业余生活”等。此话题主要涉及音乐、运动、绘画、集邮、收藏、游戏、阅读、观光旅行、饲养宠物等。此话题可以写成记叙文、议论文、应用文等文体。
【写作任务】
兴趣爱好的发掘和培养对一个人未来的人生、事业都大有好处。你有什么爱好?请根据提示和要求,以“My favorite hobby”为题,写一篇英语短文。
1. What’s your favorite hobby?
2. When did you become interested in this hobby?
3. Why do you enjoy your hobby?
要求:
1. 语言流畅,表达准确,内容充实,可适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于90词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favorite Hobby
Everyone has his own hobby. It is very important to our future.
【思路導航】
1. 审题:本文是一篇命题作文,要求学生写一篇介绍“My favorite hobby” 的英语短文。文章应是说明文,介绍“我最喜欢的爱好”,人称应以第一人称为主。注意,在讲述自己爱好的客观事实时需要用一般现在时态,讲述什么时候喜欢自己的爱好时要用一般过去时态。
2. 巧衔接:讲述自己有什么爱好时,可用as for me, from then on, not only...but also..., in my opinion 等词语来衔接上下文。介绍为什么喜欢自己的爱好并说明原因时,可用because等连词丰富文章句式。
3.句子升格:可以使用I enjoy...because...;In my opinion, they bring me pleasure.; So my favorite hobby is ...等句子,来丰富文章内容,表达自己的看法。
【谋篇布局】
【范文欣赏】
My Favorite Hobby
Everyone has his own hobby. It is very important to our future. It can make us grow as a person, develop our interest and help us learn new skills. As for me, I have many hobbies, but reading books is my favorite one.
When I was a child, I often saw my father reading newspapers after supper. Sometimes I took picture books and sat beside my father to read them. From then on, I got used to reading books.
I enjoy reading books because they help me learn a lot. Reading books can not only make me happy, but also open my eyes.
In my opinion, books are my friends. They bring me pleasure. So my favorite hobby is to read books.
【写作练习】
每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好,例如读书、踢足球、种花等。有的爱好让我们增长知识,有的爱好让我们拥有健康的体魄,有的爱好能够陶冶情操。请以“My hobby”为题,写一篇短文,讲述你的兴趣爱好。提示如下:
1. What is your hobby?
2. How did you get interested in your hobby?
3. How do you benefit from your hobby?
要求:
1.语言流畅,表达清楚,内容丰富;
2.至少写出两点从爱好中获得的益处,可适当发挥;
3.词数不少于80词。
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