安全与急救话题作文探究（二）

杨庆春

【寫作任务】

（2019·湖南·衡阳）根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。

要求：1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;

2.书写工整，语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80。

参考词汇：cover v. 遮盖    take the lift乘坐电梯    exit n.出口  towel n.毛巾  shut off 切断

【写作思路与分析】

本文是一篇命题式作文。试题要求学生以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题写出如何在火灾中进行自我保护。此文属于安全与救护这个话题，所写内容与我们日常生活中的安全教育紧密相关。根据题目内容，我们最好按照三段式方法来拓展全文：第一段引出主题;第二段具体介绍火灾中自我保护的方法;第三段提出自己的建议和主张。写作中要用上所给提示词语，尽量运用熟悉的词语和句型去写，同时可适当发挥想象力让全文更有独特性和逻辑性。

★ 写作信息要点：

1. 开篇点题;

2. 具体介绍火灾中自我保护的方法;

3. 表达主张和建议。

★ 注意事项：

1.文章所用的时态要以一般现在时为主;

2.尽量使用过渡词语和句子，使文章更加具有合理性和完整性。

【范文展示】

How to Protect Yourself in a Fire

According to a new survey， student safety has become a big problem. So， our school thinks it is necessary to teach students how to protect themselves in a fire.

And here comes the methods. First， we should keep calm and find the exit quickly. You’d better walk the stairs instead of taking the lift. Second， we should cut off the electricity in the house in case we could get hurt by it. Next， we should cover our nose with a wet cloth or a wet towel， because the fire will burn something and will release a kind of poison gas. Last， we should try our best to get out of the fire as quickly as possible.

This is our school’s methods that have taught us. I think they are very useful for us.

【实战演练】

校园欺凌行为是违法行为，我们要坚决制止。请结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和人名。

提示：

1. 谨慎交友;

2. 不参与打架斗殴;

3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。

参考词汇： 1. self-protection自我保护     2. bully n./v.欺凌

3. personal safety人身安全     4. have violent behaviors打架斗殴

One possible version：

How Can We Protect Ourselves at School

School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school， we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt， so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.

We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example， we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly， we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly， we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any violent behavior. Finally， obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.

I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future， do you think so？